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Jealousy kills you,
With every ache.
You keep your mouth shut,
Your smile is fake.

You say it's okay,
When really it's not.
It makes you sick,
But it's these thoughts you fought.

You feel the heat in your shoulders,
your hands start to shake,
You keep to yourself,
as you silently wait.

You deal with the pain,
with each word you write,
Thinking nice thoughts,
To help your mind fight.

Your stomach is turns,
You feel you should die,
But you breathe a breath in,
and you try not to cry.

It's really not bad,
this lie that you made,
To help you fight through,
As the feeling will fade.
I wrote this to help me deal with a little jealousy issue I was having with this girl...who is a friend of my friend....
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xXMonstersRawrXx Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Shit. This was wonderful.
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Brokenheartedone Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Incredibly true, It's a struggle for me. I love this guy so much, and I'm furiously jealous when there's other girls around him.
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MaikoTheDoll Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
So damn true.. Nice work, I've really enjoyed it!
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PrinceBat Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mhmm.
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jenedict Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i feel u
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Axilery Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is exactly how I feel... I have a crush on this girl, but she's with someone else... That lucky son of a bitch.
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PhoenixSkywriter Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much.

Recently I went through a messy breakup and he already has someone new and I am sick with jealousy...

So I need this. Badly.
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Taigan Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
I needed to read this today. Thank you.
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artymista Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful. It describes every thought and thing that happens when I get jealous. Which is often. Why? I don't want to be, I want to be friends with this person. But why? Why must I feel this way? I can't control it and I'll just have to bare it until the one being stolen realizes.
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ShyButterflyLove Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm a really jealous person I just realized. I hate it, it's awful. I'm jealous at those who are so loved, because I can't get that love. I just want to scream. >.<
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