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Jealousy kills you,
With every ache.
You keep your mouth shut,
Your smile is fake.

You say it's okay,
When really it's not.
It makes you sick,
But it's these thoughts you fought.

You feel the heat in your shoulders,
your hands start to shake,
You keep to yourself,
as you silently wait.

You deal with the pain,
with each word you write,
Thinking nice thoughts,
To help your mind fight.

Your stomach is turns,
You feel you should die,
But you breathe a breath in,
and you try not to cry.

It's really not bad,
this lie that you made,
To help you fight through,
As the feeling will fade.
©2007-2009 ~togivefrom
:icontogivefrom:

Author's Comments

I wrote this to help me deal with a little jealousy issue I was having with this girl...who is a friend of my friend....

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:icondramaticfairywriter:
'tis true...n.n you made the feeling come out good

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I got a call from the bear, gonna take all its honey!-YYY
:icontogivefrom:
Thank you so much.
:icondramaticfairywriter:
welcome :dance:

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I got a call from the bear, gonna take all its honey!-YYY
:iconsuicidalbuby:
Very nicely written, really shows how most people deal with jealousy :D well done! :+fav:

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I live to Die and Die to be born into The Night
~xxx~Danielle Hale~xxx~
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:icontogivefrom:
Thank you very much. I'm glad I captured the emotion appropriatly. :joy:
:iconcrepuscularia:
Perfect! This is EXACTLY how I feel too...

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For every minute you are angry you lose sixty seconds of happiness.
-- Ralph Waldo Emerson
:icontothethirdbar:
This fits exactly what I'm feeling right now.

Nicely written.

*faves*

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"You could be happy if only you'd try.
So won't you try? Won't you try?"
:iconwildaffection:
I completely agree with tothethirdbar and Crepuscularia. I also feel this exactly right now. I love it! :+favlove:

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»I am Jack's smirking revenge.«
:iconotaku-essy:
thats awesome! you hit jealousy bang on. thumbs up!

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Essy

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:iconchocolatotty:
Ahhhh
i know what you mean..
this helps
thank you
: )

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